Please edit my essay calles cognitive bias

Please edit my essay calles cognitive bias

From my professor: You’re not consistent in whether System is capitalized or whether you use numbers or words. I would use ‘System 1’, ‘System 2’ throughout.

2.Discussion of Dual Process Model and Imposter Syndrome are good, but should cite the readings we read in class.

3.In the ‘Causes of imposter syndrome’ section, you should refer back to the Dual Process model to explain it. Also the section heading is a bit wonky: delete ‘include’

4.Some more detail in the ‘How to deal’ section is needed. Not just looking for what a solution would be, but how to put it into practice.

For a paper this size, I’d say a single quote fromThinking, Fast and Slow and from either of the Imposter Syndrome articles should be enough.

PLEASE SEE ATTACHMENT OF ARTICLES READINGS and my essay called Cognitive Bias.