read essay below and critique it

read essay below and critique it

Read and critique the essay attatched below. Has to be at least 2-3 pages and MLA cited. Essay and essay outline files are all attached along with notes taken about the essay.

outline for essay

https://modesto.instructure.com/files/1595941/down…

article to critique

https://modesto.instructure.com/courses/18533/file…

notes from article

https://modesto.instructure.com/courses/18533/file…

topic sentence examples/ideas

https://modesto.instructure.com/courses/18533/file…

titles and hooks

https://modesto.instructure.com/files/1596090/down…

main points to include

https://modesto.instructure.com/files/1591622/down…